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18 January 2011 @ 09:43 pm
Yewook - April Rain - 16/20  
Title: April Rain
Pairing: Yewook - onesided!Kisung
Sub-pairings: Kyumin, Kangteuk, Hanchul, Yunjae
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Summary: They are a mistake, conceived by foolishness and brilliance. They were a blemish upon all Supernatural races. It wasn't right to have two of the most powerful races combined in one being. They must be taken down. Volunteering for this important mission, Jongwoon enters the Clan of Seoul. And there, he finds that everything he knows about them is wrong.


 

April Rain

 

õ~õ~õ

It keeps raining ‘cause you’re blind. It keeps raining ‘cause you’re tired.

õ~õ~õ

 

Segment Sixteen: Invasion


Jungsu stood in front of seven Supernaturals looking uncharacteristically serious. His hands were clasped behind his back and his expression was grim. He drew in a deep breath, as if preparing himself and then looked the seven of them squarely and began to speak.

 

“It has finally happened. The Sanction has discovered our location and will attack at dusk,” Jungsu bit his lip, as though this news pained him terribly. “Our first priority is getting the members of the Clan out. We’ll begin with those who cannot or are too young to fight. Those people will be the puplings and the self-prisoners. We’ll send a messenger to one of the other clans and ask if they will take them in. Then we’ll get everyone else out. I’m not having The Sanction come in and take every last one of you.”

 

“We can’t all go to the same clans. That’s too conspicuous as well as too much. They have their own members to take care of too,” Ryeowook pointed out. Jungsu nodded at that information. At that moment, Heechul appeared out of the shadows and joined in their conference. His eyes focused on Jongwoon and the vampire pretended not to notice.

 

“Yes, we’ll have to split up. We’ll see who has room where and split you up accordingly,” Jungsu decided.

 

Jaejoong raised a hand, “Who should we inform of this? We can’t tell everyone, nobody would want to leave. Everyone would want to stay and fight but the self-prisoners are too weak and the puplings are in no place to offer themselves to be ripped apart.”

 

Jungsu sighed, “Tell only who you must as in those that will help the move. We’ll tell everyone else that we’re doing some relocation plans. We’ll make something up about humans moving too close.”

 

Jongwoon felt sick. This was all happening because of him. He was disgusted with the way he simply obeyed Kibum blindly, telling him all that he wanted to know, even when he knew it was endangering others.

 

Hankyung piped up, “We’ll have to assign people to different areas. Someone should be in charge of the self-prisoners and someone else should be taking care of the puplings. We can have different members in charge of groups heading to different clans. Those puplings who have parents in the Clan can go with them. Enough families have been split up already.”

 

“What about those who were on the lists? Sungmin is the most wanted werepire and Jaewon is known by The Sanction. Sungmin and Jaewon should also leave,” Yunho suggested.

 

“No,” Sungmin shot a look at the werewolf, present despite his exhaustion, “I’m not leaving my clan when I’m needed. I’m the best warrior. You’re not getting rid of me.”

 

“We can’t force Sungmin to leave but we can get Jaewon to go. We’ll just assign him to the puplings or something,” Hankyung offered.

 

Ryeowook nodded in agreement, “That’s a good idea. But the problem is, what about the others? You know, Donghae and Hyukjae etc? They’ll definitely want to stay and make sure everything is okay too. What about them? They’ll know we’re trying to get rid of them.”

 

“We’ll make an announcement for the entire Clan of Seoul. They deserve to know and they’ll listen to Jungsu when he tells them to leave,” Jaejoong reassured Ryeowook.

 

“Right now, I want to assign people to different areas,” Jungsu waved his hands. “Who will figure out a place for the self-prisoners?”

 

“We will. I’ll send a messenger to the Clan of Gwangju,” Heechul offered, pointing at himself and Hankyung.

 

“Good,” Jungsu nodded with approval. “Next, who will take care of the puplings?”

 

“I will,” Jongwoon offered. “I’ll get Donghae to go with them. He loves them and where Donghae goes, Hyukjae will follow.”

 

“Brilliant,” Jungsu smiled, “Have either Donghae or Hyukjae to help you decide where to send the pups.”

 

“Now we’ll split ourselves into five groups. We have five separate nesting areas so we’ll split up according to that. Who wants to take those groups?”

 

“I’ll be in charge of one but I’ll be staying behind,” Jaejoong offered.

 

Ryeowook raised a hand, “I’ll take the second nesting group.”

 

“I’ll lead the third,” Yunho decided.

 

“I’ll be in charge of the fourth,” Youngwoon announced.

 

“That leaves me with the fifth,” Jungsu said. “All right, let’s protect our Clan.”

 

“What is it that The Sanction is trying to do exactly?” Heechul asked, having come in late and as a result, missing the announcement that Jungsu had made.

 

The Sanction is attacking us at dusk and we have to get everyone away before then. They want to destroy us,” Ryeowook answered.

 

“They’re going to try and take us down?” Heechul scoffed. “Good luck.”

 

“What do you mean? All of The Sanction is coming!” Jongwoon exclaimed.

 

“You’re talking to the vampire who ripped each senior member of The Sanction apart before fleeing to come here. Believe me, they’re asking for an ass kicking. You just take care of your groups. Leave it to Hankyung and me,” Heechul said, smirking before he vanished into darkness.

 

õ~õ~õ

 

Jongwoon walked into the Young Nest, anticipating the rush of puplings. He was surprised when he saw only Hyukjae there, cleaning a mess on the floor.

 

“Where is everybody?” Jongwoon asked as he looked around. Hyukjae didn’t look away from the soiled floor.

 

“Donghae took them to the Atrium. They’re really rambunctious today,” the werepire dancer smiled. “Why? Do you need something?”

 

Jongwoon looked away. He didn’t know how to say it. He didn’t know what to say. How could he tell Hyukjae that his life was about to change and not for the better?

 

“Hey, what’s wrong? You look really worried,” Hyukjae commented, coming closer to the vampire. Jongwoon looked at him, something close to despair in his eyes.

 

“Hyukjae, I need to find Donghae. The Sanction is attacking at dusk and we have to get the puplings to a safe place,” Jongwoon said, eyes never moving from the werepire’s face. Hyukjae went pale, mouth falling open slightly.

 

Th-the Sanction is attacking?” Hyukjae asked, voice shaky. Jongwoon nodded with great misery.

 

“Yes. I need to find Donghae because he’s going to bring the puplings who are parentless to a safe place. Do you know of a clan that would take the pups?” Jongwoon asked. Hyukjae blinked, snapping back to reality.

 

“Well, we could always ask the Clan of Busan. I’m sure they’d be willing to take the pups,” Hyukjae said hesitantly.

 

“Good. I want to be sure that there’s a place for them before I send everyone out. Will you go to them and see?” Jongwoon asked.

 

Hyukjae nodded, “Sure I can – wait hang on. Donghae’s calling me.”

 

The werepire walked out of the Young Nest and Jongwoon followed him, wondering what on earth Donghae could want at such a critical time. Hyukjae walked into the Atrium, shadowed by Jongwoon. Never before had the vampire seen the Atrium so full of activity.

 

Werepires were walking to and fro, some with messages in their hands and others with possessions. Donghae saw Hyukjae and ran up to him, fisting his mate’s shirt between his fingers.

 

“Hyukjae, where’s Jongwoon? Jungsu made an announcement for the Clan and The Sanction is coming for us. He told me that Jongwoon is taking charge of the puplings. Do you know where he is?” Donghae asked urgently.

 

“I’m right here,” Jongwoon said, poking his head out from behind Hyukjae. The werepire dancer sighed with relief.

 

“Thank god. Jungsu told me that you’re in charge. Do you know where you’re going to send them?” Donghae’s eyes were tinted with worry. The puplings crowded around his legs, keeping close together and watching the frantic clan with wide eyes.

 

Jongwoon nodded, “I asked Hyukjae to go to the Clan of Busan to ask if they’ll agree to taking our puplings.”

 

“I’m on it,” Hyukjae announced before disappearing into the shadows.

 

“We need to keep them calm,” Donghae murmured, kneeling down and gently reassuring the nearest pups with small back rubs.

 

“That’ll be kind of hard with half the Clan in an uproar,” Jongwoon reminded him softly. Darkness converged and Hyukjae stepped out of the shadows.

 

“They’ll take the puplings as soon as we want them to,” Hyukjae reported. Jongwoon nodded.

 

“All right. You two, divide the pups into those who have parents and those who don’t. The ones with parents will go with their families. Those that don’t will go to Busan. Let me find Jungsu and we’ll get underway,” Jongwoon ordered.

 

He moved through the bustling Atrium, searching for the leader of the Clan of Seoul. He found Jungsu standing near the west door, directing a couple of werepires to where the needed to be.

 

“Hey, Jungsu, the Clan of Busan says that they’ll take in the puplings without parents,” Jongwoon said without preamble.

 

“Good. The Clans of Gwangju, Incheon, Ulsan, Jeju and Mokpo have also responded. Get the pups without parents out now. We have no time to waste. It’s already midday and we still have more than half a Clan here,” Jungsu summarized.

 

Jongwoon hurried back to Hyukjae and Donghae. They had separated the puplings into two groups and were reassuring them constantly. None of the pups were smiling or playing anymore.

 

“All right, let’s get the single puplings to Busan,” Jongwoon said, gesturing to the other werepires. They nodded and immediately picked up the nearest pups. Jongwoon searched the single group until he found the pup he was looking for.

 

He made his way to Taewung who was in the middle of the crowd, looking at the other pups for reassurance. Jongwoon bent down and picked him up, cradling the small Supernatural in his arms.

 

“What’s happening?” Taewung asked, looking around in frantically, purple eyes wide with curiosity suppressed fear.

 

“We’re getting you to a safer place. You might be strong but things are about to get bad. You can come back when the bad things have gone away,” Jongwoon explained. His heart was breaking. He had caused this all to happen. The pup in his arms looked at him, gaze so trusting that the vampire had to look away.

 

“Will Jongwoon-hyung be here when it’s all over?” the pup asked.

 

“I’ll try,” the vampire whispered. He held tight to Taewung and faced the other pups. “We’ll be back in a moment. We’re bringing you to Busan where you can play with the puplings there. Just wait a moment and each of you will get to go to Busan,” Jongwoon tried to smile happily.

 

“Let’s go,” Donghae said, voice cracking slightly. Two puplings clutched tight to him. Jongwoon turned and looked at the crowd of confused pups before darkness closed over them. The shadows parted to reveal a quiet room decorated with many flowers.

 

“Hello, I am Sandara, overseer of the Pupling Care,” a female voice said. Jongwoon turned around to see a pretty werepire smiling at them. “We’ll take very good care of the pups you’re bringing to us,” she smiled.

 

Jongwoon held out Taewung, chest paining him suddenly as he transferred the pupling to the waiting arms of Sandara.

 

“Take good care of him. He likes stories,” Jongwoon said, trying to keep his composure. Sandara nodded, cuddling the little pup close. Taewung looked back at Jongwoon, purple eyes confused.

 

“I have many stories to tell him,” Sandara grinned.

 

Jongwoon watched the two of them until the shadows closed over him again. He made five trips, carrying one pup each time until all of the abandoned puplings had been brought to Busan. His last glimpse of the puplings was when Sandara began to tell the thrilling tale of her journey to China.

 

Hyukjae and Donghae were consoling the pups that had been scared and encouraging the others to play and smile. There was only one pupling not listening to any of the werepires and he had purple eyes that watched Jongwoon until darkness brought him back to Seoul.

 

He got back just in time to see the self-prisoners assembling in the Atrium, taking their turn to be moved to a different place. He searched the crowd and saw Ilbae standing with the help of a werepire he didn’t know. He assumed that the werepire was his mate, Jaewon.

 

Jongwoon made his way to the self-prisoners, looking at the previous members of the Clan of Seoul. The vampires and werewolves were all protesting despite their weakness from being locked in a cell for so long.

 

“We want to help fight,” Ilbae insisted, his weak form barely managing to stand. Jaewon propped him higher and Jongwoon’s sire glared at the leader of the Clan of Seoul. Jungsu shook his head.

 

“I thank you for your loyalty to us but you are all too weak. You need to regain your strengths. We’ll send you to the Clan of Gwangju which is closest to this. Should you wish to come back and help then you may but only once you get your strength back,” Jungsu said, his tone firm with no room for argument.

 

“We’ll go with them. Don’t worry, we have a plan,” Heechul whispered into the ear of the leader. Jungsu nodded and motioned for them to go ahead.

 

“No, I’m not leaving!” the yell came from across the Atrium and Jongwoon looked over to see Kyuhyun glaring at Sungmin who looked helplessly at him.

 

“Kyuhyun, I’m asking you to help with the second group. You’ll be helping the Clan,” Sungmin tried to calm the irate werepire.

 

Kyuhyun looked down at his Bloodmate, his entire being radiating rage, “You’re asking me to leave for Incheon and wait while The Sanction attacks. You’re asking me to leave and wait doing nothing while you’re ripped to shreds and maybe worse!”

 

“Jungmo just left for Mokpo with his group. Hyukjae and Donghae are with the puplings in Busan. Everyone’s leaving! I’m just asking you to wait in Incheon where I’ll join you after we clear everyone out,” the werepire warrior tried to explain.

 

“No, I’ll wait with you. I’m staying behind,” the ex-magnae declared. Sungmin threw up his hands in frustration.

 

“I want you to be safe, Kyu! I don’t want to see you in the hands of The Sanction screaming as they tear you to shreds! It’s happened to me. I know what it’s like. I don’t want that to happen to you,” Sungmin said, desperately trying to make his Bloodmate understand.

 

“Min, I refuse to sit somewhere, panicking and wondering if maybe, this time, you won’t come back. Maybe we can’t be killed but maybe we can. We don’t know yet. And I refuse to let you be the one to find out for us,” Kyuhyun’s voice went lower, gaze fixed slowly on his mate.

 

“It’s hard for him. Mentally, he’s the dominant of their relationship. Physically, Sungmin is the dominant. It’s hard for Kyuhyun because he knows he can’t protect Sungmin. He’s too weak. So he settles for trying to be with Sungmin at every opportunity,” Ryeowook whispered, appearing beside Jongwoon.

 

The vampire looked down at his mate, senses immediately alert. Ryeowook was tired. He needed to rest. “That’s why he’s making such a fuss about it?” Jongwoon asked. Ryeowook nodded.

 

The two werepires glared at one another. Finally, Sungmin sighed and looked away. Kyuhyun looked triumphantly at his mate. The werepire warrior raised his hand to the right side of his neck and ran his fingers over the junction of his neck and shoulder.

 

Kyuhyun gasped and shuddered violently, a soft moan coming from his mouth as he went down on one knee. He bit his lip, and he gazed up at his mate, still trying to be defiant.

 

“Leave, Kyu. Go and be safe in Incheon. I will be fine,” Sungmin murmured, stroking that spot on his neck. Kyuhyun shivered and bit back a cry.

 

“What’s happening?” Jongwoon asked. He was jostled slightly as more members of the Clan of Seoul began to leave to different destinations. He looked out the windows of the Atrium and noted with alarm that the sun was getting dangerously low.

 

Ryeowook sighed and shook his head, “Sungmin’s using his Blood Mark. The mark that Kyuhyun left on his neck after he transferred his own blood to Sungmin. If Sungmin touches it, Kyuhyun experiences intense pleasure and it’s a way of getting him to be obedient.”

 

“Oh,” Jongwoon looked at the ex-magnae who was gripping the material of his jeans tightly. “Will we have Blood Marks?”

 

Ryeowook smiled sadly at him. “You could give me one. But that would be unfair. I would have control over you. If I tried to give you one, I would kill you.”

 

Jongwoon looked away from his mate. He wanted to be able to have a Blood Mark from Ryeowook. Something about the idea appealed greatly to him.

 

“Sungmin, stop it. You can make him leave but he will come back. You can’t keep him there. Just let him stay. He would return anyways,” Jungsu said, appearing at the werepire warrior’s side. Sungmin took his hand from his neck and Kyuhyun stopped shivering.

 

“I just want him to be safe,” Sungmin whispered. “He means too much for me to let him stay.”

 

Jungsu smiled, “Don’t worry. He has you to protect him. But right now, we have to get the last group out. My group, Group Five is headed to Daegu. We need to get the werepires moving. We don’t have much time. The sun has almost set.”

 

Jaejoong, Yunho, Youngwoon, Ryeowook, Jungsu, Sungmin, Kyuhyun and Jongwoon were the only ones left along with a handful of other werepires who were all waiting their turn to leave for Daegu. They hurriedly began pushing the werepires through the darkness, time running out.

 

A black hole opened in the middle of the Atrium, just as they pushed another  werepire through. A gasp went through the remaining werepires. Jongwoon’s heart stopped. He didn’t even have to look outside the Atrium to see the army that was there.

 

A vampire stepped out, red eyes blazing as he surveyed the scene. Another vampire came from behind him, followed by two werewolves who were snarling slightly as they ripped their arms from their vampire escorts.

 

“So this is the Clan of Seoul,” the first vampire commented. Then he levelled his gaze at the group in the middle of the Atrium. “I’m Siwon, vampire leader of The Sanction.”

 

One of the werewolves broke away, coming closer to the group, “And I’m Yoochun, werewolf leader of The Sanction.”

 

õ~õ~õ

 

Segment Sixteen finished! The Sanction is here. Are you scared? Well you should be. They aren’t a friendly bunch. I hope you’ll come back for more in the next chapter. Thank you guys for reading! I love you all!


 
 
Right now, I'm: anxiousanxious
While writing I'm listening to: Supa Luv - Teen Top
 
 
( 30 thoughts — Scribble a thought )
aimaw: eunhaeaimaw on January 19th, 2011 02:51 am (UTC)
Spot?
aimaw: geng stareaimaw on January 19th, 2011 03:08 am (UTC)
The anticipation for the war is running high. The Sanction is there, right in the middle of the Clan. Fighters worrying about their loved ones, the weak are worried about the strong ones. I can't wait for the next chapter. I want to see how HanChul fight
Shae Connet: akurokuviranight on January 24th, 2011 03:42 am (UTC)
Yeah, everyone knows what's coming and what might happen. And The Sanction has arrived in the Clan and you know what happens from here on in. Well, Hanchul will make an appearance later. You'll see how it happens o(^^)o
hopeing11 on January 19th, 2011 03:27 am (UTC)
Spot:)
닌자princess_jaded on January 19th, 2011 04:23 am (UTC)
Two people this time... I've completely lost it.
닌자princess_jaded on January 19th, 2011 04:35 am (UTC)
Well, Missy, I'm ready. I know I'm going to cry because I was almost in tears now. Siwon and Yoochun are the leaders - that I didn't expect. I don't think I even realized Siwon hadn't been mentioned yet. (I want Ryeowook to kill Kibum ^^)
Shae Connet: yunjaeloveviranight on January 24th, 2011 03:44 am (UTC)
You don't need to cry for a while yet. o(^^)o I'm being nice. LOLZ yeah, a lot of people didn't realize that he was there. Well, you might get your wish. It all depends on how the coin falls. Are you paying attention, NinjaBot? Are you ready for the next chapter?
Jendesujendesu on January 19th, 2011 06:01 am (UTC)
I love this :o
Siwon is popping in all sexy like with his vampire powers :p I can't wait for the battle to start.

Aww KYUMIN is killing me here!

For some reason whenever I read The Sanction...I read it in my head with this idk, weird voice?
Shae Connet: gtopviranight on January 24th, 2011 03:50 am (UTC)
Thank you, I'm glad you like it o(^^)o Siwon is definitely a strong vampire and he'll get to prove it too. Sorry that the Kyumin is killing you! I'll have them resolve their issues in a little while.

Hahaha, well, it is in italics. Now that you've mentioned it, I do the same thing!
danangeladanangela on January 19th, 2011 07:42 am (UTC)
omg i'm so excited!! and totally scared at the same time!
Shae Connet: yewookloveviranight on January 24th, 2011 03:51 am (UTC)
I'm glad you're excited for this. The new chapter will be up shortly!
hibinoasakohibinoasako on January 19th, 2011 09:26 am (UTC)
KSJFHAKSJFDHKASJDHKJASD THEY ARE HERE OH MY GOD.

hey wait. the clans of seoul didnt ask why Jongwoon knew that the sanction will attack? they didnt mad or Yesung hasnt told them anything?

anyways i hope they're save x(

thank you for the update :)
Shae Connet: hanchulloveviranight on January 24th, 2011 03:53 am (UTC)
Yes, The Sanction has arrived. Ooooooh. The Clan of Seoul didn't ask Jongwoon because it was Ryeowook that told them. And they didn't question because it was so serious that they couldn't afford to treat it as a joke. And Yesung hasn't told them who he is either.
harunomasuharunomasu on January 19th, 2011 12:31 pm (UTC)
Oh, there is also werewolf in The Sanction! That's scary~ And the clan of Busan lols

Bb Jongwoon, keep wishing for the Blood Mark and maybe the author of this story would give it to you!! xD
Shae Connet: uchiha_sasukeviranight on January 24th, 2011 03:56 am (UTC)
Yeah, The Sanction consists of both vampires and werewolves. Double the hatred. Heeehee, I wish. I would love to give him a Blood Mark but that would kill him.
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Shae Connet: jaehoviranight on January 24th, 2011 03:56 am (UTC)
Yuppers, they have both! LOLZ, Heechul will be here to kickass! No worries!
yukihime13yukihime13 on January 19th, 2011 03:37 pm (UTC)
omg sorry i've been a silent reader but i always look forward to your story..

daym i thought it was kibum..

but the kisung yewook stand off would be soon ryt?? omo cant wait!!!

Shae Connet: strifentineviranight on January 24th, 2011 03:58 am (UTC)
LOL it's okay. No worries. I understand the silent reader thing. I am a nortorious silent reader! Well, Kibum will arrive soon. Then there will be a stand off between the two.
vin11lovervin11lover on January 19th, 2011 04:19 pm (UTC)
what? siwon? i thought he was part of clan of Seoul too. LOL
i didn't realize he never be there xDD
but it make sense. it makes kibum his right hand.

well, i know you said warepires can't die. that surely help me relax because kyuhyun and sungmin won't die. but please don't make heechul die again T^T
i cried when he died on the formphaser. T_T
and if wookie won't kill kibum, at least make yesung do it. xD

and yoochun?it means junsu will appear too? xD
*sigh* i really enjoy this so much, and when it come to 'continue' to the next chapter i let go of my breath. i don't even know since when did i held it xD
more!
ps. now i know your pattern, if you replied my comment, it means the next chapter is going to be post soon! xDDDDDD
Shae Connet: jaejoongieviranight on January 24th, 2011 04:00 am (UTC)
Yes, Siwon is a leader of The Sanction Yup, Kibum ranks just under him by a few. Nope, werepires can't die. Or at least, not the way they expect them to. Heechul won't die again. I promise. I need him for something.

Junsu will be appearing too. Next chapter will be up soon! That's been my pattern for as long as I've been writing fics. Now you know my secrets! o(^^)o
rayneweatherrayneweather on January 20th, 2011 02:27 am (UTC)
I haven't commented on the last few segments but I am reading them as soon as they are posted. Oh my, the big invasion is about to begin. The scene with Taewung broke my heart. Jongwoon better make it back to take care of him. So Siwon is the vampire leader. No doubt Kibum is there, too. Maybe Siwon should be Bummie's mate, assuming they survive. I'm anticipating Jonwoon getting outed as the spy and Ryeowook coming to his defense.
Shae Connet: sasugaaviranight on January 24th, 2011 04:01 am (UTC)
No worries, I don't mind that at all. o(^^)o Yes, the invasion is finally happening after sooo long. Taewung is probably my favourite part of the fic. I kind of want a little werepire like him now. Teehee, well. We'll see how Kibum and Siwon work out. And you are perceptive! Nice work. Stay tuned!
numbuh_009numbuh_009 on January 20th, 2011 03:07 am (UTC)
Ooh, anticipation. Huh, Siwon and Yoochun; I was kind of expecting Kibum (and a Kibum and Yesung smackdown). KyuMin- so sweet! Really looking forward to the next part!
Shae Connet: kyuminviranight on January 24th, 2011 04:04 am (UTC)
YES> ANTICIPATE. ANTICIPATE HEAVILY. Well, Kibum will arrive soon. And he'll bring his own problems with them. Kyumin is sooo hard to write in this fic. I don't know why.
sujulurversujulurver on January 20th, 2011 04:06 pm (UTC)
OHMAIGAWD!!! ._.!!! ITS HERE!!! THEY'RE HERE! OMG! NO!!!!!!! PLEASE! DONT KILL ANYONE!!! DDDDDD: ON THE OTHER HAND, THE KYUMIN PART WAS XDDDDDDDDDDD DAEBAK! XDDD I LOVE HOW SUNGMIN HAS CONTROL OVER KYUHYUN! HEEHEE~ XD AND YES, WOOKIE SHOULD GET A MARK FROM YESUNG AND TAKE CONTROL OVER HIM! 8DDDDDD OH NO! IS KIBUM COMING AS WELL?! /DIES FOREVER! DDDDDDDDD: UPDATE SOON~ <3
Shae Connet: moonlightviranight on January 24th, 2011 04:06 am (UTC)
I love how this comment is in all caps. That's awesome. I have to kill someone. It's me. There has to be some moment where you cry. o(^^)o The Kyumin was difficult to write. I wanted emotions to show through for them but I wasn't sure how to go about doing that.

I want to give them each Blood Marks but if Jongwoon gets bitten he'll die. So that's not good. Kibum is coming. Another update will be here shortly.
可愛 사랑 <3read0write on January 21st, 2011 04:18 am (UTC)
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG
at least they got most of the people out but the fight is about to start...
i bet siwon is kibum's true mate
but omg yoochun and siwon are the leaders of the sanction...
what's going to happen now? OH NO!!!!

can't wait for next update :D
Shae Connet: kyumincuteviranight on January 24th, 2011 04:06 am (UTC)
Teehee, Yeah, they got people out but now the real drama begins. We'll see how things play out from here. Yes, they are the leaders and that means WAR. Like majorly. Next update soon!
casanova7casanova7 on January 22nd, 2011 01:42 am (UTC)
Hi! ^^
1st: Shae, you are amazing as always! *thumbs up* This story is as great as Formphasers series. I love this :)
2nd: I want to say sorry coz I just read this story now, LOL, I spent a whole day to finish reading chap 1-16 :P at first I was hesitance coz the main pairing is YeWook, but my friend told me that there's a lot of KyuMin in it, so I read it, and omo this is great! Once I start reading this, I can't stop myself to read the next ^^
YeWook is sweet while KyuMin is....uuuhhh I don't know what to say..they made me melt (>.<) I love manly!Min *dies* The idea of Min being the dominant for physically while Kyu is dominant mentally is awesome! Yesung is charming here, i like it ;)
I hope there will be peace at the end, and I hope there's no one from the Clan of Seoul will be dead (coz I'll be crying for sure), but I know you have your owm way in making the story and I believe you ^^
And I have a hunch that Kibum will end up with Siwon, hahaha xDDDD

How lucky I am to read this when the story almost come to climax! *is very excited* I can't wait for the next chap! :D
Thanks for sharing, Shae! :)
Shae Connet: kyuminloveviranight on January 24th, 2011 04:09 am (UTC)
Hello again! Long time no see!

Aww, thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying it. Wow, a full day? That's insane! Kudos to you! Hahaha, yeah you're like me. If it's not Kyumin then it takes a while to decide on whether to read it or not. The Kyumin in this is hard to write because I have to convey their emotions really perfectly or it doesn't work. Ahh!

Hopefully you'll enjoy the rest of the fic as well. Thank you for reading, next part up soon!
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